I was all set to announce I was posting a story (two stories, in fact!) last night when I ran into a great screaming pile of deeply problematic writing. I’d managed to overlook it on my first go-round with the rewrites, but fortunately I caught it on the pre-posting reread.

So this would be me rewriting the rewrite so that it refrains from alluding to something that could be described (at best) as dubious consent.

The other story is fine to post (nothing problematic to it) – but it would be better if things went up in something approaching chronological order, so it waits while I fix my mistakes (hopefully not introducing new ones).

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